As promised.
I'm posting my paper fresh-from-the-turning-in. I thought I would condense my paper a little bit for geniality's sake, but what the hay. I also thought I would spruce it up because I'm not the proudest of my grammar and syntax, but what-evs. I am proud of the content. So ignore the rest!
Here it is, cliche-ness and lamity of it all. Also-the form didn't transfer completely from Word, but you get the idea. I've highlighted the "sexy-points" so you guys can tell when the information is getting interesting.
There are various reasons to eat less meat. Doctors have warned against the over-consumption of meat for health reasons for decades. Animal rights groups have pleaded consumers to acknowledge the cruel practices of the meat industry and go vegan or vegetarian. Now scientists are urging the community to reduce our meat consumption in an effort to help save our environment, as many reports and studies are proving a link between pollution and the devastation of eco-systems and the meat and fish industries.
The old image of wide, open ranges and cattle ranchers is transforming into vast factory farms, machinery, and cages. Around the turn of the 20th century the Industrial Revolution transformed the meat and fish industries, bringing machinery, efficiency, and productivity to the forefront. Upton Sinclair was one of the first critics of the revolutionized meat industry in his muckraker classic, The Jungle. His work opened the eyes of the community to the evils of the industry, prompting regulations and government control. Most people assume to this day that the government protects our interests regarding what we eat, that strict regulations ensure a healthy product, a healthy working environment, and a healthy community. The trouble with this assumption is that the regulations are not only insufficient, they are seldom enforced. According to Eric Schlosser, author of Fast Food Nation,
The meat-packing industry’s response to The Jungle established a pattern
that would be repeated throughout the twentieth century, whenever health
concerns were raised about the nation’s beef. The industry has denied that
problems exist. [Its] strategy has been driven by a profound antipathy to
any government regulation that might lower profits.[i]
This lax enforcement of regulations is accompanied by massive government subsidies, aimed at keeping prices low for the consumer.[ii] So, what exactly is wrong with the meat industry? How does it effect the environment? First of all, the meat industry uses 70 percent of the world’s agricultural land for production.[iii] Much of this land is used to produce the feed to support their operations, as factory farms are quickly replacing open-air ranching. This land is being used inefficiently. A 2.5 acre plot of land can produce enough cabbage to feed 23 people, whereas the same land could only feed 2 people from chicken, and 1 person from beef.[iv] This data is disturbing, considering the fact that 70 percent of our usable land is being used to feed so few, especially as population levels skyrocket. In the coming years, we simply won’t have the resources to continue this way.
In addition to the poor usage of our limited land, the meat industry is a major pollutant in our community. Peter R. Cheeke, professor of animal agriculture at
Raising cattle in huge feedlots [and] consolidating swine and poultry
production into huge confinement units… [is] a frontal assault on the
environment, with massive groundwater and air pollution problems.[v]
Factory farms cause a toxic environment for those unfortunate enough to live nearby. For instance, “Factory hog farms commonly emit copious amounts of animal waste produced in their facilities into huge open-air pits called lagoons,” which sometimes leak diseases and ammonia into our communities. Additionally, we are running out of clean water, and the meat industry is exacerbating the issue. Not only does the meat industry pollute our waterways with tons of animal waste, it also uses an extraordinary amount of water for production. According to Soil and Water specialists of the
The fishing industry is no better. The introduction of new technology has allowed the fishing industry to increase its catch nearly tenfold in the last fifty years. In the last several years the world’s oceanic fish catch has stabilized because we’ve reached our limit. We simply cannot catch more. “In 1997, the United Nations Food and Agriculture Organization reported that 11 of the world’s 15 major oceanic fishing grounds had gone into serious decline as a result of overfishing.”[viii] Additionally, over a third of all fish species are threatened with extinction. One answer to the problem of overfishing has been the emergence of aquaculture, or fish farming, the solution has proven as dangerous as the problem. Fish farms have received negative attention for various troubles. First of all, “Diseases and parasites thrive in the densely populated conditions of fish farms, and can easily spread to wild populations.”[ix] Secondly, it takes about 5 pounds of wild fish to produce a single pound of farmed fish or shrimp, so the argument that aquaculture saves natural grown fish is moot. Thirdly, waste disposal problems from fish farms destroy our waters. The diseased and filthy waters the fish are not disposed of appropriately. Additionally, more and more fish products consumed in the
[i] Schlosser, Eric. Fast Food Nation: The Dark Side of the All-American Meal. (
[ii] “Deadly Diet that is Killing the Planet.” Editorial. Western Daily Press January 28, 2008: 12.
[iii] “Deadly Diet that is Killing the Planet.” Editorial. Western Daily Press January 28, 2008: 12.
[iv] Robbins, John. The Food Revolution: How Your Diet Can Help Save Your Life and Our World. (
MA: Conari Press, 2001) 294.
[v] Robbins, 235-6.
[vi] Robbins, 236.
[vii] Fanelli, Daniele. “Meat is Murder on the Environment.” New Scientist, vol. 195 issue 2613 (2008): 15.
[viii] Robbins, 295.
[ix] Robbins, 299.
[x] Brooks Vinton, Sherri and Ann Clark Espuelas. Real Food Revival. (
[xi] Fanelli, Daniele.
Anywho, I'm rambling, and I need to step down from my soapbox now.
6 Comments:
Boy! That's a mouthful! Can there possibly be any more reasons to be veg*an?
Well said - thanks for getting the many messages out there -
For health & heart.... Go VEGAN
ok, i'll admit it...i started reading til i got to the line that says "there are many reasons to eat less meat" and the carnivore self inside screamed "steeeeeeaaaaakkkkkk" and my eyes teared up and i couldn't go on.
but i promise to try again later.
Amazing Ashley. Very well written but boy, this kind of thing causes me such shame. I am a HORRIBLE example of U.S. minded "over-everthing"! I will ponder this for certain. Thank you for sharing.
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Ok, so I finally read your post. I was saving it for when I'd have time to read it without being interrupted. Hahahahahaha! It took me 3 tries, but it's been read.
I am hereby making a commitment to lessen my meat consumption drastically. Being married to a caveman, (he's already said, "good, I'll eat your meat")I can't say I'll go completely veg, but I'm definitely going to reduce by alot. Thanks for posting this, it's a good reminder of stuff I already knew and had some good info about stuff I didn't.
Kara- Yes, I expected such a reaction...
Sue- Thanks, and no prob!
Sarah- Awesome! Glad to have had an impact. Its definitely one of those things where little attempts can go a long way over time. Like turning off lights when you leave a room, using energy efficient light bulbs and so forth. God knows I'm not going to stop completely eating seafood, but every time I start eating a tuna sandwich lately that little pang of guilt nags me from within... *sigh*....
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